Working on multiple pages….

2018/09/14

After a week of break, because it was my birthday, I was able to update today. And it wasn’t really a break either! While I didn’t add a new page last week, since I wanted to think about designs a little, I was still working on future pages…just not in order.

I feel like I need to be really careful with how I go about the coming plot info. For one, it was something I was still developing, but then it also just came to me…It all starts to make sense. I was wondering about the role of certain characters, and how they got into the position they are already in, but now that I had a bit of time it actually makes sense…

Gotta work on that (super secret) time sheet…lol

Also, we meet a new character…the boss of the rebellion, but what on earth is he doing?

What is going on? Well I didn’t know either until I really thought about it and now I know and things are falling in place. Something that will be addressed now in the second half of chapter two…

I want to address something, that I’m really nervous about…

It’s about an upcoming scene that involves Liora and Skye. And I am very biased towards these two, but hear me out…

I’m worried that the upcoming interaction between them (see above) might be or might seem unnecessary. Like, why am I showing this? To me it makes sense, but maybe it’s too detailed? (There won’t be anything explicit, just obvious.) I want to show their relationship, because I feel it’s important, but right now, with how the interlude went so far, it might seem, that it’s only talking about sex. It started with Skye’s flashback about his wife, then went right into his hinted “affair” (not so much) with Liora, then up to the nameless girl clearly fancying him, and then, after some plot driving, might end with him and Liora in bed? Is it too much?

I will give my dear friend Mokuyo the rest of the chapter to read and see how she thinks about it before I upload it, because I really need some feedback. As much as I enjoy drawing these two together, I could just not upload it to the degree I am right now intending to…but I don’t know…

I hope, that in case I upload the whole thing as intended, I can get some feedback, because I’m quite nervous about it…

But yeah…I really don’t know…

So please, feedback, thank you, that would be nice. Bye.